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In my opinion that early society of industry had developed quickly, and also result in the population is booming of city. A lot of young people have moved in city to find a job form country. And it made rapidly population of country to reduce. As a result of the most obvious for this phenomenon is that city has more employment opportunities. Consequently, population began hugely into city. No matter how, a lot of people moved in city may cause some problem. First, crime rate was raised. Secondly, housing shortage. Finally, higher expend of resource.

With industrial’s construction changed to into high technology and business type that is promotional development of city. At that time, those people consider that if they are moved in city to get a greater job they could be improving life with a good payment. In fact, those people had certainly created economic development and improved life quality. On the other hand, although rural emigrants contributed greatly to the economic growth of the city, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts and so on.

Many sociologists point out that rural or foreign emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems. In those factors, crime rate was raised that it is increasingly serious and also cause form various society problems. The official has an obligation to improve crime problems that official should take measures to solve those society problems.

It is suggested that government ought to make effort to reduce the increasing gap between cities and countryside. They ought set aside an appropriate fund for improvement of the standard of peasants’ live. They ought invite some experts in agriculture to their share experiences, information and knowledge with country rural people, which will contribute directly to the economic growth of rural area.

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In my opinion that early society of industry had developed quickly, and also result in the population is booming of city. A lot of young people have moved in city to find a job form country. And it made rapidly population of country to reduce. As a result of the most obvious for this phenomenon is that city has more employment opportunities. Consequently, population began hugely into city. No matter how, a lot of people moved in city may cause some problem. First, crime rate was raised. Secondly, housing shortage. Finally, higher expend of resource.

With industrial’s construction changed to into high technology and business type that is promotional development of city. At that time, those people consider that if they are moved in city to get a greater job they could be improving life with a good payment. In fact, those people had certainly created economic development and improved life quality. On the other hand, although rural emigrants contributed greatly to the economic growth of the city, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts and so on.

Many sociologists point out that rural or foreign emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems. In those factors, crime rate was raised that it is increasingly serious and also cause form various society problems. The official has an obligation to improve crime problems that official should take measures to solve those society problems.

It is suggested that government ought to make effort to reduce the increasing gap between cities and countryside. They ought set aside an appropriate fund for improvement of the standard of peasants’ live. They ought invite some experts in agriculture to their share experiences, information and knowledge with country rural people, which will contribute directly to the economic growth of rural area.

Correcting

In my opinion industries in early society development quickly, resulting in the populations of cities booming. Furthermore, many young people have moved into city to find jobs. The most obvious result for this phenomenon is that the city has more employment opportunities. Because a lot of people moved to the city, some problems also occur. First, crime rates go up. Secondly, there re housing shortages. Finally, there is higher expenditure of resource.

With industries changing new technologies and business types promotes the development of the city. Many people consider that if they moved into the city to get a better job they would be improving life by getting an increase in pay. On the other hand, rural emigrant contributed greatly to economic growth of the city, but they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts as well.

Many sociologists point out that rural or foreign emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems. In those factors, crime rate was raised such that it is increasingly serious and also causes various society problems. The official has an obligation to improve crime problems who should take measures to solve those society problems.

It is suggest that the government ought to make effort to reduce increasing gap between cities and rural. They ought to set aside an appropriate fund for the improvement of the standards of poor people. They ought to invite some experts in economic and urban to their share experiences, information and knowledge with rural people, which will contribute directly to the economic growth of rural area.